To recieve audience feedback I shown friends and family my trailer and they told me what they liked and disliked about it and gave me ideas on what to change and improve.
1ST DRAFT:
"the lyrics of the song dont fit in where Luke is singing"I did notice that this was the case therefore we have decided to remove this from the trailer as it was either early or too late with the transitions between each clip. We used 'Garageband' on the Macs to loop the beginning of the track. The track is still recognizable and works well with idea of the soap.
FINAL DRAFT:
"some of the transitions between clips are missing"
I realized after this was brought to my attention that some of the transitions between each clip were missing. I didnt want them after every clip as it wouldnt look professional but I wanted them between each storyline so the viewer knew when a storyline ended and a new one began.
POSITIVE COMMENTS:
"the song really works well with the idea of the soap"
"it's hilarious!"
"you've shown the characters from TOWIE really well, yet added humour"
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